Bleeding Pain

My heart is bleeding

Dying a slow death

Bleeding of getting stab in the back to many times

Trying to scream but it hurts more

 Staying in silence; not saying a word

Just watching

Thinking I have a good life

But I’m on the floor bleeding

Seeing my husband f*****g my best friend

I took my last breath

Last thing I hear is “I LOVE YOU CRYSTAL”

Then my eyes were sealed.

 

Author's Note

pain is the worst thing that can happen to you

Reviews

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... true that ... this is sheer torture ... expressed with mind-numbing precision ... very powerful ... but why should the narrator be pushed to a "last breath"? ... why let these other characters win? ... pain should be not be belittled ... and facing it does not make one weaker ... it takes courage to face it ... i think the narrator should respond rather than react ... deception should not be allowed to win ... :( ...