The Brown Sugar

He's my Brown Sugar

He's my considerable treat I need to eat

The brown sugar to finish my chocalate cake

The brown sugar to feel the music in me

About my brown sugar that's so sweet

 

But brown sugar has to be in my life

Or my recipe won't be complete

My life would be ruined

Without my brown sugar

But what if I can't finish his recipe?

Then brown sugar wasn't the worth spending

Author's Note

ingore the grammar, i'm new here just comment please

Reviews

[Simpleasures]

Brown sugar is definitely a tasty ingredient that will make a recipe complete. Nicely done. I need my brown sugar on a regular basis.

[*~Kristy~*]

Really good, but you may want to change the word "have" in the second sentence. Because its like saying that you MUST be with him. Other than that, I really liked it.