life is empty

Life is empty

I’m swimming in the White Sea

Nothing there but me

Dreaming some one to rescue me

Swimming trying to get away

But no ones there to take my heart away

Still trying to live my life on this cold, cold day

Praying someone was there to build me up to take my breath away

Still I’m alone almost about to drown in the White Sea
Wishing and Praying

Somebody just someone to come help me

But it’s a white sea the only there is me

So how will they see me?

Author's Note

this is really new just wrote in a while

Reviews

[Simpleasures]

I felt the desperate plea in this piece, I actually envisioned everything you described. Great job.

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

Wow... Absolutely amazing! Beautiful imagery used, beautiful rhyming, beautiful concept-just beautiful! Keep on writing :)