I sob when I'm alone

I sob when I'm alone

A Poem by Samual Hartwell

I lay here in the bed

Lost in the never said

Try to mend the broken

Left hurt by the spoken

My heart is in the cold

Didn’t mean to I am told

I can take the blame

Even own the shame

How long can I last

Strength, but only cast

Weakness clearly shown

I sob when I’m alone

© 2018 Samual Hartwell


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wonderful poem i loved it great write keep up the great work and keep writing

Posted 6 Years Ago


This poem has a lot of feelings put into it. I love the rhyming! Nice job Samuel.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Samual Hartwell

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your review.
Spoken from the heart and soul. Reaching out toward others who do understand. But life does get better slowly. Be kind to yourself. And love you as you deserve it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samual Hartwell

6 Years Ago

Sadness is often easier to express the depth of, but scarier to put on paper. It was one I felt nee.. read more
This is a touching poem. It flows well and I love the rhymes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Samual Hartwell

6 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Samual Hartwell
Samual Hartwell

Winfield, KS



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