Hope

Hope

A Poem by kjsa
"

So build it up let it free, show the world what you can be.

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Hope such a intriguing ideal

even in the worst ordeal

it'll bring you back in the fight

with ten times the might

Like the tiniest of embers

in a fire pit left to die

a colour of bright amber

hope can light up the night sky

left their it'll start

a blazing forest fire

or the warmth to mend a heart

and light a pyre

With a roll of a die

this ember will fly

so build it up let it free

show the world what you can be

© 2011 kjsa


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Hope--a wonderful topic to write about; we need more of it in this world. You used great metaphors, and painted with your words. Well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


wow. i love it i love the flow, and the begging and how you finished it off, amazing all around!!!

Hope such a intriguing ideal
even in the worst ordeal
it'll bring you back in the fight
with ten times the might

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on November 28, 2011
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kjsa
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