A look of heavyheartedness

A look of heavyheartedness

A Poem by Kandy Kitt
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difficult.

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The afflicton of your words
are swords that can puncture.
Each one a batter at my soul.
You distort my meaning of life
as I am of adolescence.
With a mind that can be
molded and forged.
You push and shove
till I'm at the breaking point.
I'm about to fall over the edge.
You were supposed to save me.
My sweet mother dearest.
So who is my guardian now?

© 2012 Kandy Kitt


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PS I LOVE THAT YOU DON'T BELIEVE IN JESUS

Posted 12 Years Ago


The *affliction of your words
I am *of adolescence.

Other than those two errors, this is quite good. Inspiration draws best from personal experience and your mama seems to be chock full of inspiration (sadly under dire circumstances). I realize that this is a rough time right now but writing things like this are great ways to release pent-up emotion. Keep on writing my girl

Posted 12 Years Ago


Powerful, excellent write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


God is your guardian now.
Good, short and sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. So deep, so emotional. I like it.



Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 4, 2012
Last Updated on April 8, 2012
Tags: swords, soul, poem, poetry, hard, sad, shove, kandy kitt, save, breaking, meaning, life

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Kandy Kitt
Kandy Kitt

Alberta, Canada



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Hello there. My name is Kandy Kitt. I live in a world where misconception is at it's finest, and life is taken too seriously. My writing is personal, most of it has something to do with what has happe.. more..

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