Don't Wake me Up

Escape to the beautiful world of dreams..

It's 5 ' in the morning .
But don't wake me up!
It seems more beautiful than this realistic,
It is more pleasant, kind
Filled with happiness all over.
No one's being betrayed,
No wars to be fought,
No one's sad here.
Don't fade my dream,
Don't wake me up.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Tamar]

I have never read poetry that illuminates the possibilities in sleep state like you do in this poem. Love this!
Tamar

[shadrach hah]

Hi Kriti, such wonderful words do flow down the page. Your words sing of the land of dream, a place in which we can find our joys and sorrows elevated. Your words sing of this land of wonder. Many are the times I wish I could stay within a tender dream. Your poem makes me think of these times.

[Kriti Singh]

Thank you 😊

[shadrach hah]

you are welcome