All I See

You're all I see
& it scares me
That I'm blinded
So indefinitely

There is no sight greater
No sight beyond
No male spectacle
Because you are all I see
& it undeniably
Terrifies me

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

Sounds like an obsessive love or just a new love. It's good, but I think you should lengthen it, maybe a couple more lines. Given the subject, you should add a little more.

Either way, it's a short and almost lovingly written expression regarding Love.