No Feeling

Standing here
Tears streaming down my face
No feeling

Numb to the pain
Will I ever love again
No feeling

Heart's crusted over
It thumps in my chest
Meekly and slowly
No feeling

Where do I go
What happens next
I take a bow
Done with the rest
No feeling

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Having no feeling is a feeling too.. I think whatever we say, and however much we choose not to feel, we do feel..
This is a deep piece! Nicely penned!

[AustinDF]

Strangely it made me have this weird feeling of no feeling...

Very well done