the meaning of love

it`s about a girl named Kayla. who feels that her life is pointless and has a crush on this boy named James , and then finds out later on that shes in love with her best friend.

On a  cold and stormy winter day , in a small yellow house on the corner , lives a fourteen year old girl named Kayla.
she didn't have much of a life , she has a mother and no father. her father died a year ago , because a drunk driver hit his car
flinging him out of the car and onto the road. her mother and her haven't quite talked about it , but then again they don't get along much
since her mother remarried to a guy named George. she goes to school and comes home right after. she finds it hard to cooporate with her so called "life". she goes on the internet each day to talk to her e-buddies because they give her such a positive out look on life.
Kayla Signs on
Mission: heyy hun , how was school today?
Kayla: hay marissa , it was good . James looked at me today
Mission: omg is that a good sign or a bad one?
Kayla: i don`t have a clue Marissa , he wouldn`t give me a chance. ever .
Mission: snap out of it Kayla. your a good looking girl , and you never know things can happen
Kayla: oh Marissa thank you oh so much. i just wish it would happen.
Mission: your welcome darlin. but i must be going know i have to study for my big final. bye <3
Kayla: bye
Mission logs off and James 007 logs on.
James 007: yo Kayla whats shakin?
Kayla : oh hey James. nada you?
James 007: same , hey what are you doing friday night?
Kayla: nothing yet , probably just staying at home.
James 007: you wanna hit a movie with me?
Kayla : sure :) , but i should get going.
James 007: alright see you friday night at 7 ;)
Kayla logs off

After she logs off she screams with joy , and then she start's thinking about what just happened. "its just a dream" she told herself , but it actually wasn't. she was so excited she could sleep that night. she couldn't wait for Friday night , and it came so fast. on friday she went to school with a smile on her face , and tried to make friends. she made a few more friends. she walked by james and he smiled and winked at her , and her heart melted at that very moment. she went home from school and went straight to her closet. she picked out her favorite jeans and a t-shirt and went on her way to the movies. she shows up at the movies to find that James was there with another girl. when she saw that , it felt like somebody ripped out the heart right out of her chest and threw on the floor and stomped on. she immediatly ran out and ran into Ryan , her best friend since they were five years old. their convo goes kind of like this.

Kayla blushes then says " oh i'm sorry ryan , i was just leaving my date stood me up for another girl and well i guess he wasn't really my date. "

Ryan simply replys with " it's alright Kayla , say would you like to go to a movie with me? it could be a date , but id understand if you don't want to"

Kayla immediatly responds " id love to Ryan . but theres something , that i would like to ask you"

Ryan nodds then says " alright ask"

Kayla questions " is this like a date date or are we just going as friends? "

Ryan blushed and  answered with " i guess its a date date , cause Kayla i really like you."

Kayla corresponded with " great , cause i kind of really like you to"

so Ryan and Kayla held hands and walked into the movie theatre together , to watch the brand new scary movie.

 

The End.

Reviews

[Forist.johnston]

It was very cute. The colors were kind of like 'BAM' in your face! But other then that you seem to have captured the teenage spirit. =]

I can understand about the IM part, but the spelling and grammar was� awful. If you'd like I could fix it for you. I will! Here is what you did in the spelling part [minus the OBVIOUS things like capital I's and capitalizing the first letter in a sentence *cast you a disapproving look*)

[Come on now, capital O] on a cold and stormy winter day , in a small yellow house on the corner.[I don't think there should be a period here�] lives a forteen [did you mean to spell fourteen? Ah.] year old girl named Kayla.
she didn`t [didn't] have much of a life , she has a mother and no father. her father died a year ago , because a drunk driver hit his car
flinging him out of the car and onto the road. her mother and her havent [Haven't�]
quite talked about it , but then again they dont [don't forget the apostrophe..] get along much
since her mother remarried to a guy named George. she goes to school and comes home right after. she finds it hard to coporate [cooperate] with her so called "life". she goes on the internet each day to talk to her e-buddys [I think 'E-Budies' would be more appropriate]
because they give her such a positive out look on life.

Viola! There's the first paragraph done. I think you can handle it from here, but I'll do the second if I must. =] I know grammar sucks, seriously, I know. But it's a part of writing still.

-Forist