she

she just wants to cry
until her eyes go dry
cant you see what you done?
i guess not
she fell for you so hard
i guess thats something she did wrong
you played games with her heart
now it`s broken and dark
but then again you don`t care
cause your walking with another girl
around the park
while she`s crying herself to sleep at night
you party till the sun is up and shining bright
i guess she should of died like you wanted
but that`d hurt your pride
because you wanted to watch her
suffer for loving you with her whole heart
but i guess you`ll be the one to make her heart stop it`s beat

Author's Note

i wrote this for my friend , she wanted me to write her a sad poem.

Reviews

[Last Lying Look]

"i guess she should of died like you wanted
but that`d hurt your pride
because you wanted to watch her
suffer for loving you with her whole heart
but i guess you`ll be the one to make her heart stop it`s beat"
I loved that part.

I found this painful to read but I think I'm just very sensitive tonight.
It's very sad but I love it.
Excellent writing!

-Elissa :)