Conditional Redemption

In suffering there is conditional redemption

The madrigals, that bear the voices of my forefathers

Imbued with blood that reign in fate

Written in writ of tablets

That foretel how centuries may repeat itself

 

Of diseases and death, that lies in every DNA

hidden are the powerhouse of life

For every centuries written in veins

Is a suffering intertwined in the blood of ancient

          ancestral chains

 

Gateway looms closed, a path stygian plain

abyss of eternal human suffering

Though closed such door,such a mighty pain

Conditional redemption is truly rewarding

Author's Note

In suffering there is redemption

Reviews

[masqued_muse]

Unless one has lived it; found it, one doesn't know....amen. Of the Highest Order.
masqued_muse

[Hayley]

I think this whole poem is really strong the whole way through. You have expressed your opinion very well, and I like it. Very good job!

[sherwin]

Really liked it, especially the title. It shows you're thoughtful with your words.

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this is a powerhouse of a poem..strength..thought provoking

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I have to say, congratulations, you have spoken uttered timeless words that portray human investment's for the very reason itself, well written, great read.

[A.D. Wilson]

Wonderful! This reminds me a little of some of H.P. Lovecraft's work. I think it was the "Gateway looms closed, a path stygian plain" line that felt so Lovecraftian. Great job.

[Randolf Ramos]

thanks roarke i appreciate it, hope i could add some lines to let it end in a beautiful way. Still finding words that is right for it.

[roarke]

I like where it's going, but it seems unfinished, just feels like it searches, follows, illuminates and then............ but maybe that's what conditional redemption is...

[Randolf Ramos]

Thanks sherbs death.

[Sherbs Dreaming Tree Of..]

An amazing depiction of the future my friend