The Candor Sea

Buffoon me no more 

Oh sea! that billows I see

Your torrent is beauty

I wonder what candor silence be?

In this glimpse of life,
into marrow doused

Only beauty flickers its light

That these eyes will only see such sight

Author's Note

Please decipher what's in my mind.

Reviews

[heich]

galing..

I think it has something to do with nature?
Either way, it's a great poem!
The imagery is vivid, the flow is excellent
And it makes you feel like you've gone on a mini vacation :)

[Hippy]

i liked this for my interpretation i see that of falling for someone maby or even seeing somthing of great beauty even nature, but regardless of my wrong interpretation it was a good short peice, and the interpretation can really only be done best by the writer

[Nina Kari]

woman or man which ever floats your boat. at least, thats what i see from what your words say. we are beautiful killers. drawing attention even if we do not know it. great write here even if i did get it wrong ;D

[Poetry Girl]

this was well written and it flowed nicely. great use of words too. good one.

[Jas Alejandrino Ramos]

such an amazing greatly inspired poem of praise in the beauty of the creation of God:)

[Ruth]

This is wonderful writing and at the same time, the eyes feel (here) as though they can only focus on the beauty for fearing of not having any beauty, if that makes sense lol
Everyone interprets differently I guess lol
There has to be beauty hel in the heart, or what is there to exist for at times!
Great work love
xx

[Cherrie]

the raw beauty of nature some fear and others are drawn like a moth

[RJM]

correct me if I am wrong but is this about death? The ship is you, the sea represents the suffering that you have endured.

[David W Moore III]

First, I have to say I love the use of buffoon as a verb. And yes there is beauty in natures raw fury. The last stanza - you got me. It perplexed me. Sounds nice, but I can't quite wrap my brain around it.