Forty Winks on Dover Beach

The wind fainly sway,
lending forty winks
Swiftly playing with dune
into downy flakes
A dover noon sealed a soul in kind
Many own idle thoughts,
flitted through this mind.

Author's Note

This poem is not yet finished

Reviews

[Hippy]

its alright i do see it is imcomplete but pretty picture so far

[Moonflower]

Very nice, then.

[Brittany W]

Beautifully written, great write.

[Seosaimhín]

This is a lovely start to the poem! I think it could also stand on its own, should you decide to leave it the way it is. It feels very peaceful, and calm. Thanks for sharing it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the location of Dover beach. In my young days I took the ferry to England. The beauty was amazing. I have the pictures still of the cliffs. A very good beginning to the poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

I like the direction of it a lot :) Interesting poem love!
What can those thoughts be? Wonder if there is a peaceful ending or not lol See, you have me intrigued now! lol
xx

[Bard Constantine]

This has a peaceful feel to it... a pleasure to read and contemplate...

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sends you on a beautiful journey..peaceful..well penned

[Nina Kari]

this is great. i thought it was done. i think its perfect the way it is. fantastc work

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

very graceful~ very crisp~ like fresh morning air~