Distilled Spirits

Carpe diem! Clock is ticking!
Out of carmine bottle lying
A distilled spirit of carouse
Intoxicating chant of lavished dose

Cheroot's brush painted in chiaroscuro
Pitched yarn, an astral body
Chianti mist, frigate of soul
Asudden blandished into scoundrel fowl

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

A delightful blend of hues
mixed with spirits and a
playful ruse....

[heich]

Carpe diem!..sorry cant understand..lol..what does it mean..great poem though..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this is so vivid and spectacular in its splash of colors drawn through words placed in perfect patterns to draw out the mood of the piece~ well done~

[the in between]

some possible errors: "chiasroscuro" to "chiaroscuro" right?

and asudden is a sudden

hahhaha i didnt know some of these words i had to look um up so its mostly wine and cigars. Thats a twist that these distilled spirits are of carouse

overall this was superb!!! :D
In such short sentences it seems like every line means something

[Candylove.]

I love your word choice. ha, I can honestly say this poem is one of a kind. A fantastic piece! :)