Genre of Rain's Music
A Poem by
Randolf Ramos
I was all of the flutter
When music is worthy to decipher
Drops of rain ring the ground With vibes of colorful sound I think that is all my eye Unlike a bear in a sour mood The ambiance bear a hand Stinging bee in one's bonnet And so it came to pass That mortals, be born with blue hood Still this rain is a boon companion Sets the genre of emotion Gently fall! Rain! the tempo Subtle in meaning for few Life dances with your music Oh rain! Oh rain! I hope you knew.
© 2010 Randolf Ramos
Author's Note
Sit with the music of rain and feel your emotion. Then ask yourself what is it?
Reviews
I absolutely adore rain...so much so that my family thinks me mad...haahaha..You've captured a bit of it and brought it to life here in this poem..This is absolutely my favorite stanza -
Gently fall! Rain! the tempo
Subtle in meaning for few
Life dances with your music
Oh rain! Oh rain! I hope you knew.
- Truly lovely..Rain ..water..the giver of the breath energy..the renewer...
Posted 14 Years Ago
Love the rain, and your words bring alive the power of its song. There is a rhythm and dance to the rain like nothing else on earth.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Love the rain, and your words bring alive the power of its song. There is a rhythm and dance to the rain like nothing else on earth.
In the summer I often go out in the rain, especially the first summer rain...I feel the life brought with the rain...it is a ritual for me to take off all my clothes and feel the rain on every inch of my skin in acceptance of this life giving rain...the desert and my emotions turn green with new leaves and new life.
Posted 14 Years Ago
In the summer I often go out in the rain, especially the first summer rain...I feel the life brought with the rain...it is a ritual for me to take off all my clothes and feel the rain on every inch of my skin in acceptance of this life giving rain...the desert and my emotions turn green with new leaves and new life.
I love the use of blue in this poem, rain and the colour blue complement each other perfectly!
The sombreness to this poem is beautifully done love!
Serious kudos! lol
xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
I love the use of blue in this poem, rain and the colour blue complement each other perfectly!
The sombreness to this poem is beautifully done love!
Serious kudos! lol
xx
It is a boon….
To be able to feel with the music of rain….
Not everybody is gifted with it…
Loved the poem very much….
Posted 14 Years Ago
It is a boon….
To be able to feel with the music of rain….
Not everybody is gifted with it…
Loved the poem very much….
My grandparent had a metal patio roof. When it rain it was music. The poem is beautiful. A outstanding poem. Music in all things if we listen.
Coyote
Posted 14 Years Ago
My grandparent had a metal patio roof. When it rain it was music. The poem is beautiful. A outstanding poem. Music in all things if we listen.
Coyote
GOOD JOB!
Posted 14 Years Ago
GOOD JOB!
Another beautiful peice. i had to read it slowly to understand it. maybe im losing brain cells :p but it was still a great write
Posted 14 Years Ago
Another beautiful peice. i had to read it slowly to understand it. maybe im losing brain cells :p but it was still a great write
I really liked the feel of this poem...
Usually, I make myself a big mug of coffee and I enjoy the rain sitting on my window :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
I really liked the feel of this poem...
Usually, I make myself a big mug of coffee and I enjoy the rain sitting on my window :)
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