Genre of Rain's Music

Genre of Rain's Music

A Poem by Randolf Ramos

I was all of the flutter
When music is worthy to decipher
Drops of rain ring the ground
With vibes of colorful sound

I think that is all my eye
Unlike a bear in a sour mood
The ambiance bear a hand
Stinging bee in one's bonnet

And so it came to pass
That mortals, be born with blue hood
Still this rain is a boon companion
Sets the genre of emotion

Gently fall! Rain! the tempo
Subtle in meaning for few
Life dances with your music
Oh rain! Oh rain! I hope you knew.


© 2010 Randolf Ramos


Author's Note

Randolf Ramos
Sit with the music of rain and feel your emotion. Then ask yourself what is it?

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I absolutely adore rain...so much so that my family thinks me mad...haahaha..You've captured a bit of it and brought it to life here in this poem..This is absolutely my favorite stanza -
Gently fall! Rain! the tempo
Subtle in meaning for few
Life dances with your music
Oh rain! Oh rain! I hope you knew.
- Truly lovely..Rain ..water..the giver of the breath energy..the renewer...





Posted 14 Years Ago


Love the rain, and your words bring alive the power of its song. There is a rhythm and dance to the rain like nothing else on earth.

Posted 14 Years Ago


In the summer I often go out in the rain, especially the first summer rain...I feel the life brought with the rain...it is a ritual for me to take off all my clothes and feel the rain on every inch of my skin in acceptance of this life giving rain...the desert and my emotions turn green with new leaves and new life.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the use of blue in this poem, rain and the colour blue complement each other perfectly!
The sombreness to this poem is beautifully done love!
Serious kudos! lol
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


It is a boon….
To be able to feel with the music of rain….
Not everybody is gifted with it…
Loved the poem very much….


Posted 14 Years Ago


My grandparent had a metal patio roof. When it rain it was music. The poem is beautiful. A outstanding poem. Music in all things if we listen.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


GOOD JOB!


Posted 14 Years Ago


Another beautiful peice. i had to read it slowly to understand it. maybe im losing brain cells :p but it was still a great write

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really liked the feel of this poem...
Usually, I make myself a big mug of coffee and I enjoy the rain sitting on my window :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 6, 2010
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Randolf Ramos
Randolf Ramos

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