Soul's Tenement

The music in every soul

A note heard inseparable to moan
In a duel recital of lavished excitement
All octaves sung in all sort
Touched the very soul's tenement


Lend me your sentiment in this eerie night
My soul is frozen in this recital
Yet this symphony that I love to hear
Haunt me a sweet embrace

Love! ah, thou music that didst gave
In this solace of confined reality
If bittered by parting
Sing me a sweet symphony

Reviews

[Joanna Maharis]

I love your beautiful use of language. Great imagery. I also like the musicality of this piece overall. Well Done.

[heich]

flowed like water..lol

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beauiful, just flowing off the tongue...wow ..lovely piece

[Liz-z]

"Lend me your sentiment in this eerie night
My soul is frozen in this recital
Yet this symphony that I love to hear
Haunt me a sweet embrace"
Fantastic, truly talented.
Absolutely adored it! Loved it!

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

If bittered by parting
Sing me a sweet symphony..nice!!!..beautiful.

[DontXletXmeXknow]

This is beautiful.

[Ed Hart]

i'm sure the picture was posed to some intent; it doesn't look very comfortable

[Ruth]

OMG! lol
This is brilliant! I adore this poem :)
Music can drive the soul to live for another day, you have mastered the art of expressions really well, beautiful poem
xx