Red Flower

Red flower that bee cometh
the dew have kissed thy lips
thy sight is peace
a thousand bees didst tamed.

Tame mine hate, if hate is loving
Thy love forget not the hate
hate not before thy love
morning is thy bosom's fate

Reviews

[abigail elizabeth]

I like it =)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful construction~ engaging~lush poetic~

[Randolf Ramos]

Thanks for the comment, I am working with my punctuations, I forgot all the rules about it. Thanks for appreciating, I appreciate it very much....

[Clockwork]

I like the vibe of this, it is pretty strong. Shakespearean inspired I take it? I like the old Dialect that you use. There are a few cracks in it, but they could be evened out with a second run through. Just a few punctuation things. Other than that this is an effective piece.

[Love Is Dead]

beautiful poem!

"Thy love forget not the hate
hate not before thy love"

i love this line. very imagery.

[Joanna Maharis]

Wow! This is really beautiful and full of vivid colors of imagery. I also love and appreciate the deep seeded emotions within this piece, in that they are so prolific.

[Pikachu]

"morning is thy bosom's fate"

i agree this is the epitomy of love iself

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"morning is thy bosom's fate"

...the serenity of love!!!

james:-)

[Ruth]

AWESOME!
One of my favourites so far I think!
Old style and yet capturing the duality of love and nature, wonderful
xx

[Leanne Conway]

It's short but sweet. =)