Feather of the Peregrine

I wish, I was a feather gliding in air
Soft as the crystal's flare
And wish to be blown anywhere to take
Journey not by wing hook on peregrine's fleet

Peregrine, sweet mother of sky
This little feather wished to be blown in sigh
The air in way too dear
May lift the feather in air's free will

Reviews

[Joanna Maharis]

Beautiful use of language throughout this piece. The imagery is enchanting, and allows the reader to become a participant in the entire experience. I like that. As I was reading this piece, I was so captivated by it, in that it brings out fond feelings of a magical place.

[Desert Dreamer]

To have the freedom of a feather in the air...and the subtle power given as a child of the falcon. There is a deep meaning in this short poem.

[Pikachu]

being free is what we all want yet i takes time and a price

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i love the surreal nature feeling
of illusion like freedom in this...

...magnificent poem!!!

james:-)

[Ruth]

I like the freedom quality to this work! Although, as I read your poetry, I am becoming more and more aware of the fact there is a lot more than meets the eye to your work lol
Excellent poem love!
Truly beautiful
xx

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

light as the breeze~ a lovely~ airy~ soothing write mixed with petals of hope~

[Leanne Conway]

This was beautiful. =) I love it.