The Rapture

Whose soul finds no zephyr
The roaring thunder console not
Wondering if the tattle
Helps to find and wont find the light

When the time dilates
The zenith points the flickering light
Souls find the zephyr blows astray
Some wonder what it might

Reviews

[Ruth]

Oh wow!
This is beautifully written, I like it a lot :)
Who knows what surrounds us and listens to our hopes and fears?!
Great poem
xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Words are power and can create great pleasure. This poem words were a pleasure to read. Question and wonders in your words. The soul ending is of unknown journey. No-one has came back to tell the true story. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Nina Kari]

Interesting work. It makes me want to look up what you're talking about exactly. I like it. Keep it up!

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"Souls find the zephyr blows astray
Some wonder what it might"

{a haunting poem of the soul-i love the second verse especially-great poetry}

james:-)