Soul Within A Dream ( Dream Within a Soul )

Near the sea,
I filled the earth with fan leaf tree
To give chirping robins a clasp, and hide
Late the day, one enjoys the ebbs of tide

Someday, one could tell what nature be
a dream that stays with me
All worries, pressure of the day subside
The future of the unborn child

Under which a soul could rest
From crux, a tortured crest
This place hath done whats fair
Epitaph of my sweet ember's care

Dream is noble for the soul
Whose soul dream not
Faint -hearted dream it is without soul
and soul it is that dream, if by dream is soul we ennoble

I dream and filled the earth today
Hoped that dream would always stay
The time will I expire and rest on the ground
My dream will grow, stand, and live this land

Reviews

[Ruth]

To know the dream is laid bare boned is to see it in all its glory!
This is beautifully written love :) An awesome poem
Dreaming put in a unique manner!
Great work
xx

[Dressed in Poetry]

I like this poem a lot. I've been reading through a few of your poems, and I have to say that I really enjoy your writing style. It's sophisticated and elegant.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. Nature and us must learn to bond. The dream in this poem can come true. I like the last line. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Jason Galliger]

my favorite part:

"I dream and filled the earth today
Hoped that dream would always stay
The time will I expire and rest on the ground
My dream will grow, stand, and live this land"

great job, each stanza carried so much imagery and inner revelations for me to ponder

[Liz-z]

"Late the day, one enjoys the ebbs of tide"
I really could just picture that, fantastic job!
"...,One could tell what nature be,
A dream that stays with me
All worries, pressure of the day subside"
Fantastic lines, amazing job! :D

[.]

Beautifully structured and the descriptions are vivid pictures in the mind, I thought that the four stanza..was a little off (not sure if that was meant) but loved it

[heich]

beautiful..magical..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

classic surreal beauty~ beautifully coposed~

[Candylove.]

This piece has so much to offer, from its complexity to it's gorgeous imagery. I could read it over, and over again. :)

[DamienHino]

I like the title great poem the last part was my favorite
"I dream and filled the earth today
Hoped that dream would always stay
The time will I expire and rest on the ground
My dream will grow, stand, and live this land" dreams to become reality is what many wish