Lest not the night bereave with thine solitude

You sat with your solitude under the plenilune sky
And tell the shore to have a plangent sigh
Who was made by laws invisible to the eye
And be complaisant for you not to cry?

You tell the rain to pour?
To kiss your cheek and hide your tears at all
Do you believe that stars will close the canopy?
To give way to rain accordingly?

Thus your solitude found delight on refluence of tide?
blurted sounds with magic must abide?
Tell the moon that there's no ebbs of tide
The song it has you won't believe

Lest not the night bereave with thine solitude
if thy solitude won't compliment the dew
Though the night holds peaceful views
it follows a law, will you believe? Don't you believe it, Do you?

Reviews

[heich]

lovely..

[Bard Constantine]

Echoes a little with the voice of Poe... there is a vintage sound to the construct of the language that adds a certain eloqence... nicely done.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very powerful poem. It is needed to be read a few times. So many good statements in this poem. I like poem that end with a question. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ruth]

I could belive that actually! lol Awesome poem love!
Solitude knows shadows, those shadows hold laws unto themselves too! Through that solitude, the hope of blessings in the following hours bring liberation, what a process!
Great poem
xx

[DontXletXmeXknow]

This is really good :) beautiful.

[Desert Dreamer]

I like sitting with my solitude, the night is full of mysteries.

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Very classical and beautiful..i like 'plenilune sky' and 'plangent sighs'

[Liz-z]

Wow, outstanding vocabulary is one. Two, beautifuly written for sure! It was an amazing poem.I loved it from the star to the end! :) Bravo!

[Dream Weaver]

Well written, flowed
perfectly..enjoyed..

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

classical ~ beautiful mood piece with exquisite descriptive riches to be found in every lovely line~