Because I Love You

Because I Love You

A Poem by Randolf Ramos

If it is not for love that you love me
Then it is not love that is truly love
Freely we choose what to feel innuendo
The time that love is in the air
Sometimes life is, I know but love isn't fair
To feel this I knew
That I did not love you for the sake of loving
If I did, I was not noble to be true
That it isn't the mind that stir in your hue
Ti's feeling in cease is nobler than what is known about love
And what is true, I love the feeling of being in love
I'll take all cliches for it
I was refined by love
In this sense - not for someone
But for everything that encompasses
I did not love you for the sake of loving
And I truly love the feeling
I love you, not as loving for its sake
Then it vanishes all of my hate
That truly love I feel in the air
I did not love you to be of being in love
Because I Love You

© 2010 Randolf Ramos


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To describe love or anger. Is a impossibility. I like the way you described it in this poem. Words mean little when they are not true. Love are the gifts we willingly share without the desire of profit. A outstanding poem. I could read this poem many times.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


"I'll take all cliches for it
I was refined by love
In this sense - not for someone
But for everything that encompasses
I did not love you for the sake of loving"

(you have slick way with words my friend--love this}

james:-)

Posted 14 Years Ago


"And what is true, I love the feeling of being in love" - I can feel what you mean. I too have did once. Well said.

Again, I'll have loads of praises for your work. But some monotony restricts me from giving them away.. :)

Maybe you really should employ a format and write in it. That way, you can express yourself more clearly. Rather than that, the whole poem seems better and beautiful in a form (Forms weren't created over a tea chat, lol. They were created by true poetic minds and they do have a meaning.)

Keep writing.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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