Irony of my Existence

Have you ever wonder the way I do?
Why do we have to live, do this and
that from our own point of view.
why do we have to be born, or one to be mourned
Inspite of our struggle to care, we are the one scorned

Does it make sense to love and to give?
in life’s journey our need yet havent been conceived
Maybe we are fool by our own delusion.
That the key in our life is the best education.


Take a look at me, the one with humility
Some other think, I live in insanity
Maybe its kinda weird in spite of my humbleness
I was prosecuted by my own tactfulness


I’ve tried to live my life in irony.
I’ve followed their heart whole heartedly
But I am the one who suffer in the end.
For the life that I’ve built and a life so sublime
Now is a dream, I thought would never end…

Reviews

[J.S. Pua]

nice write, my friend..
last two stanzas was my favorite..
good work..

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"Take a look at me, the one with humility
Some other think, I live in insanity
Maybe its kinda weird inspite of my humbleness
I was prosecuted by my own tactfulness"

{nice verse--very sharp lines}

"I am the one who suffer in the end.
For the life that I’ve built and a life so sublime
Now is a dream, I thought would never end…

..love the ending...superb poem:-)

james:-)