A LETTER TO TERRORISTS - THE MURDERERS OF PEACE

A reaction to Nice attack of France.....

Shedding the blood of innocent ,

is what happened in France in recent.

Many in Bangladesh you slaughtered ,

many innocents you murdered.

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Sad is the thing you get happiness by killing ,

you get happiness by blood shedding.

You are not a human ,

You are more than even a demon.

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Can you tell me what was the mistake ?

of the people whose lives you take.

Can you tell me what problem you had?

That terror missions you always laid.

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

Merciless killing is what you like ,

making thousands of kids orphan by killing their parents is what you like.

Spreading hatredness is what you like ,

seeing the flood of blood of innocents is what you like.

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

You are not the culprit of only those who were killed ,

you are the culprit of all Muslims whose soul you killed.

Allah never gets happy by seeing the graves of his children You made every person look with a vision of hate to a Muslim.

Because of a handful of you ,

whole Islam religion's respect and glory is destroyed by you

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is .

You did a sin against humanity ,

You kill all with a vast rapidity ,

But mind you the world will not listen ,

but put your hatredness in prison .

Killing you is a very easy death ,

And you are not worth of it ,

What you think by killing people you can rule this world ??

If you are thinking so , your ambition is in mud.

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

Do you want this world under your rule?????

RULE , RULE the barren world , RULE !!!!

Because no human will accept your rule.

Do you want this world under your rule?????

RULE , RULE the soil  , air and water RULE!!!

Because even , birds and plants won't accept your rule.

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is.

You think you won by killing people everywhere ??

Let me tell you the stupidity you have is rare.

I will not do the mistake by saying you an animal ,

Because the language of love and peace is known even by an animal.

Terror is what you like ,

But mind you, the day is not far when all of your lives will be on a permanent strike.

A letter to the terrorists this is ,

A letter to the murderers of peace this is...............

Author's Note

This was what i wrote after the recent attack in Nice , France and also to the attack which happened in a cafe of Bangladesh....I hope you all like it.....

Reviews

[Tina Marie]

This is so great! I love your message for peace!!! Please keep up the great grammer. You must know how to use the Microsoft online community! I am [email protected] MICROSOFT EDUCATOR

[mattavelli]

Hello, riddhi, thank you for entering my contest! :)
You've put a lot of passion into this writing. I enjoyed reading it.

[Riddhi]

Thank you..

[natzky]

this poem is very timely..thank you for writing such great poem, it will serve as an eye opener to everyone to embrace peace, and love for humanity..:)

[Riddhi]

Thank you..

[Troy Henson]

Very well articulated. A powerful message and enough emotion to make the reader stand still and absorb your message. if only the rest of the world saw through your eyes here.

Well done

[Riddhi]

Thank you..

[Tina Marie]

I love this. It really speaks to me. You have a few grammatically errors. Find, "The Little Brown Handbook ADA style." You should publish this. We are in time where people need peace, then take time to listen. Thank you for you beautiful words.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your review and spending your precious time in reading my poem....

[Ken Simm.]

Unlike some reviewers here I feel that it is not the style in which this is written that makes this powerful or not. It is rather the incredible message it sends to all those who would feel they have the right to kill.
It goes further and sends an equally powerful message to those who feel you can tar everyone with the same brush. You hope the reader likes it. The reader should be grateful. It is not a poem to be liked. It is a poem to educate.

[Riddhi]

Actually what you said is true i too feel so..I am not among those writers who can make his reader love his writing by beautiful language and style but among those writers for whom writing is a way to spread messages and to educate people. It is a way to speak about wrong things happening in this world , to speak about social evils .....But i just wish that if i could also know how to write poem comprising beautiful language and wonderful style!!!!!!
Thanks for your honest and constructive review......

[Manisha]

Well written, I like this poem a lot and it flows really nicely.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your review...

[siddhi]

ya i agree to the previous reviews
this is a very important topic and the way aimed it is very good
the last two paragraphs are just beatiful there flow is quite perfect saying that i move on the upper parragraphs there peotic tool is a bit weak they could be added with a more peotrical style and symetry
all in all it is a beatiful peace of peotry deeply loved it

your frnd
siddhi

[Tazeen Ahmed]

you have conveyed it so intensely , expressing grief , sorrow .... the way you write is flawless

terrorism has nothing to do with RELIGION
the media has glorified it that way

well conveyed !!
thanks for sharing

[Akki]

According to me, you gives the formation of words to every Indians feeling.... Your writing is really good and improved... thanks!

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your review akki.....

[Akki]

your most welcome!