Rise up Rise up!!!!

A poem from the core of my heart

Time comes when you just cry and cry ,

At that time you should tell yourself to again and again try.

Every diamond was earlier a coal ,

Do not limit yourself to just one role.

Rise up, rise up whenever you fall ,

those who demoralize you, you have to show them all.

when everything you possess ,

life appears like a bed of roses.

you have everyone as your friend ,

and happiness becomes your trend.

But when you are enveloped by problems,

you understand that on this bed of life there are more thorns than petals.

fair - weather friends are discovered.

true friends are the one who always cared.

Every dusk is followed by a dawn ,

Every autumn is followed by a spring.

Thus every failure is followed by success.

Courage is not to be shown ,

when it is easy to show.

Brave is not the one who moves from light to light ,

but the one who moves from dark to light.

Rise up , Rise up whenever you fall

Those who demoralize you , you have to show them all !!!!!!!

Author's Note

Kindly review my poem and tell me how you felt after you read it...

Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

A touching write well written

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing....

[richieb]

Riddi, loved your poem. Strength through pain, fight the good fight. Your poem captures the spirit of persevering through the trials to change things for the better. Many are called but few take the initiative to make a difference. You, young lady will be a difference maker. Many Blessings, Richie B.

[Riddhi]

Thank you so much....thanks for your kind words and your kind words indeed motivated me to write something again which will fulfill your expectations from me...Thanks for reviewing...

[Emily]

Very nice poem!!
Keep on writing!

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing....

[Jacob Clifford]

Great message here, Riddhi. A little surge of inspiration is always welcome in these rough times.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing....

[Deepak Belbase]

Inspirational! I think you should try this with a story version. It was like a lecture... but i expect more from you... you can sounds it like a moment that inspired you... otherwise grammar and rhythm was good,,, put your potential to right track! You've done a good work but it's not met my expectation from you... i hope u will write something to slap on my face... and i'll wait 4 it!

[Riddhi]

Oh! Thank you and i will try to meet your expectation and actually your review have kindled the fire within my brain to write something nice..
Thank you

[Deepak Belbase]

don't think of try to meet my expectation,,, only focus on your work, put your all effort and mind on that thing you desired to do! don't burn yourself, just cook something tasty to eat! I'm your reader and i'm feeling hungry!

[Riddhi]

I will...hey that message don't you think was a message from exactly a writer , i mean by your language...

[Riddhi]

I wrote this poem under true circumstances of my life.....I hope you all will like it....