Rise up Rise up!!!!

A poem from the core of my heart

Time comes when you just cry and cry ,

At that time you should tell yourself to again and again try.

Every diamond was earlier a coal ,

Do not limit yourself to just one role.

Rise up, rise up whenever you fall ,

those who demoralize you, you have to show them all.

when everything you possess ,

life appears like a bed of roses.

you have everyone as your friend ,

and happiness becomes your trend.

But when you are enveloped by problems,

you understand that on this bed of life there are more thorns than petals.

fair - weather friends are discovered.

true friends are the one who always cared.

Every dusk is followed by a dawn ,

Every autumn is followed by a spring.

Thus every failure is followed by success.

Courage is not to be shown ,

when it is easy to show.

Brave is not the one who moves from light to light ,

but the one who moves from dark to light.

Rise up , Rise up whenever you fall

Those who demoralize you , you have to show them all !!!!!!!

Author's Note

Kindly review my poem and tell me how you felt after you read it...

Reviews

[annalysiar]

I felt hopeful, light
its inspiring and raw, a wonderful message.

[Riddhi]

Thank you for your kind words...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The title intrigued me cause Sixx Am has a new song called rise up... I think this is an inspiring poem for of some creatively wise verses...

Every diamond was earlier a coal ,
and

Courage is not to be shown ,
when it is easy to show.

are a couple of my favs...

One thought, should it be "Every winter is followed by a spring"
Just a thought.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your kind words...Yes , i will certainly try to make change and follow your suggestion of replacing autumn by winter....

[Jess]

''Every diamond was earlier a coal ,
Do not limit yourself to just one role.''--this is one of the best lines I've ever read.

I love the strong message your poem delivers. Its motivating and very optimistic. Keep up the good work.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your sweet words...

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree dear Poet.
"Rise up , Rise up whenever you fall
Those who demoralize you , you have to show them all !!!!!!!"
I liked the positive energy and the drive in your poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing......

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

You keep raising your bar Ridhi. This is just superb, different from what you have been writing but equally good or I will say one of your best piece and I really enjoy reading your work. You have great future ahead little girl, with these kinds of thoughts and the talent you possess....keep writing....

[Riddhi]

Oh!! Really ????? I am happy that you liked my poem and thanks for reviewing....

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Yes, I enjoyed this poem a lot..You are welcome. the little poetess :)

[sansrity sinha]

very motivating!
good one!

[Riddhi]

Thank you!!!

[Dayran]

Certainly the best guides to life's possibilities are those experienced by the writer themselves. It assures the reader of a proven worth.

[Riddhi]

I agree with you and thanks for reviewing....

[Dash the Reaper]

a very good poem,only one thing i need too know,
try,cry
possess,roses
friend,trend
were you trying to rhyme in the poem or it is just random???

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing and about the question what do you think...If you think i was trying to rhyme tan i will improve my rhyming skills required in poem and if you think i was doing it at random then i will try to improve...Critics are open , i as a girl of 15 years needs to learn from all my faults and improve....

[Stan Lee]

Great positive vibe Riddhi. :) Thanks for sharing

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Kathryn Smith]

Ahh! I LOVE this!! :) Very well done. It was something I needed to read. Thank you!

[Riddhi]

Hey! I should be thankful to you for your kind words....thanks for reviewing...