Rise up Rise up!!!!

A poem from the core of my heart

Time comes when you just cry and cry ,

At that time you should tell yourself to again and again try.

Every diamond was earlier a coal ,

Do not limit yourself to just one role.

Rise up, rise up whenever you fall ,

those who demoralize you, you have to show them all.

when everything you possess ,

life appears like a bed of roses.

you have everyone as your friend ,

and happiness becomes your trend.

But when you are enveloped by problems,

you understand that on this bed of life there are more thorns than petals.

fair - weather friends are discovered.

true friends are the one who always cared.

Every dusk is followed by a dawn ,

Every autumn is followed by a spring.

Thus every failure is followed by success.

Courage is not to be shown ,

when it is easy to show.

Brave is not the one who moves from light to light ,

but the one who moves from dark to light.

Rise up , Rise up whenever you fall

Those who demoralize you , you have to show them all !!!!!!!

Author's Note

Kindly review my poem and tell me how you felt after you read it...

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

How does that song go? Always look on the bright side of life.
Though usually, someone is trying to kill you at this point.
Always walk tall.

[Riddhi]

Yeahhh..Thanks for reading my poem.

[Mari' Emeraude]

Wow! A lot of wisdom here and you're spot on about it all. Great poem Riddhi

[Riddhi]

Thank you Mari..

[wordman]

rise up,and never give up

[Riddhi]

Hmm..Thanks for your review..

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Neville]

Always look on the bright side...negativity sucks............. more positivity in a poem would be very hard to find... nice one ... Neville

[Riddhi]

Thank you Neville..You are correct in saying negativity sucks..We all should try to be positive in our life always..Thanks for your review...

[Neville]

I am positively delighted & twas my pleasure... N

[wredit.jordan]

I love the lines "Courage is not to be shown, / when it is easy to show." So beautiful. I love your wording. Keep up the great work:)

[Riddhi]

Thank you..I am happy that you liked it..

[barleygirl]

Your poem is an uplifting message that’s well-balanced between expressing real-life & yet also showing many of your ideas using metaphors from nature. Sometimes a poem like this can sound a little hollow to a person who is feeling down. Lots of times, people who are feeling down will think – this is easy for you to say, becuz you are not near-suicidal. Lots of people in a bleak state of mind do not want to have someone telling them to cheer up. If they could cheer up, they would! So, with all that understood, I feel your poem is as sincere as any uplifting poem could possibly be & that’s why your poem doesn’t feel at all offensive when you tell people to stand up & get tough & be in the fight. There’s a perfect balance to your message, so that it doesn’t come across in a superficial “rah! rah!” way. I can feel your depth of sincerity (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Riddhi]

Actually few days back I was also in the same state, I didn't want to live but I used to read this poem again and again and you know everything is with me is fine now..I can understand that state because I myself was once in the same state...Thanks for your wonderful review...

[barleygirl]

Life can be a struggle . . . I'm glad you're feeling better!

[Onlyme]

Beautifully expressed and so heartfelt.

[Riddhi]

Thank you maasi..

[Kichu]

Lovely use of words, rhyme scheme firmly placed. Very motivational and simple to understand. Effective in every sense of the word.

[Riddhi]

Thank you..I am glad that you liked it..

[splattercore]

It may be hard and it may seem impossible but take that leap. Jump as far as you can. If you fail, don't lose hope. Even if you fail one time or a hundred times, all you need is that one time where you didn't fail and you succeeded. You only need one "Yes" in a sea full of "No's". Don't lose hope.

Amazing!

[Riddhi]

Thank you..Actually I am waiting for that one yes in a sea full of no's but I don't know when I will get that...Anyway , thanks for your review..

[AlinaTheCacti]

Written beautifully and every verse has meaning behind it which supports to the main idea of the whole poem. No fluff added.

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--Alina The Cacti

[Riddhi]

Thank you...