I hope this poem will change your minds and make you the follower of greatest religion in this world that is none other than humanity ........and you will follow your own religion but will never have hatredness towards the religion of others.....
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Look online for George Harrison's ---- My sweet Lord----- Not until the end does he reveal his Lord by name. But as your words suggest, we're one big family in the same big blue boat.
Very big hit all around the world, excellent Sitar playing.
John
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thanks for your review...I will definitely check that song..Thank you again..
you know I really like what you are saying here....and even the religions that may not celebrate God as just one, the message of us all being One is loud and clear and a profound one. I really enjoyed this work.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing and i am happy you enjoyed it and Happy New Year....
Hi Riddhi, I love the idea of this. Sometimes I think the world would be a better place without religion, or perhaps I mean religious intolerance and religious certainty. I like the one religion you write of.
One thing, the same principle as I think I commented previously on another of yours, is the call to action. If your previous verses have 'worked' then the call to action is unnecessary and a little patronising. I think they do work and personally I would remove the final verse.
Regards
Nigel
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing and i will definitely try to improve myself and Happy New Year....
I agree.
'Let us forget all our differences ,
based on religion , caste or nation.
Have just one religion in mind ,
and that is humanity ,
and say together ,
God is one.........."
One people and one earth. We must get a long for the sake of the children. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing and i am happy that you agree with me and Happy New Year...
8 Years Ago
You are welcome and I hope you are having a safe and fun New Years.
I am atheist but yes humanity should be the only religion.. we are born as humans but the society labels us and divide us into different classes... loved the way you named Emily, Shazia and Vishaka in it intelligently... another good work....
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thanks for reviewing and i am happy you enjoyed it and Happy New Year
8 Years Ago
I always enjoy your writing... Happy New Year to you too.... :)
Thanks for reviewing,,but why it will not happen it will if we will love our religion but not hate o.. read moreThanks for reviewing,,but why it will not happen it will if we will love our religion but not hate others and have deep belief in humanity...
I am Riddhi , a 17 year old girl , a proud Indian...My friends say that i am antic but i am not antic rather i am unique..I am queen of mood swings and its really difficult to handle me...I love trave.. more..