God is one

God is one

A Poem by Riddhi
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This is a poem which is about unifying people of all religions....

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Hindus celebrate Diwali ,
Muslims celebrate Id , 
Christians celebrate Christmas , 
But yet,
God is one.

                                                                            Vishakha worships Krishna , 
                                                                            Shazia worships Allah , 
                                                                            Emily worships Jesus ,
                                                                            But yet , 
                                                                             God is one.

Hindus go to Varanasi , 
Muslims go to Mecca Madina , 
Christians go to Jerusalem , 
But yet , 
God is one.

                                                                          Hindus visit Temple , 
                                                                           Muslims visit Mosque , 
                                                                           Christians visit Church , 
                                                                          But yet , 
                                                                          God is one.

God made all humans one ,
Religions were our creations,
Greatest religion is only one , 
and that is none other than humanity.
But yet , 
God is one.

                                                                       Greatest service is service to humanity , 
                                                                        Greatest work is striving for others ,
                                                                        Greatest religion is humanity , 
                                                                        and so , 
                                                                        God is one.

Let us forget all our differences , 
based on religion , caste or nation.
Have just one religion in mind , 
and that is humanity , 
and say together , 
God is one..........

                                                                       

© 2015 Riddhi


Author's Note

Riddhi
I hope this poem will change your minds and make you the follower of greatest religion in this world that is none other than humanity ........and you will follow your own religion but will never have hatredness towards the religion of others.....

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Amen my friend.

Look online for George Harrison's ---- My sweet Lord----- Not until the end does he reveal his Lord by name. But as your words suggest, we're one big family in the same big blue boat.

Very big hit all around the world, excellent Sitar playing.

John

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riddhi

6 Years Ago

Thanks for your review...I will definitely check that song..Thank you again..



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you know I really like what you are saying here....and even the religions that may not celebrate God as just one, the message of us all being One is loud and clear and a profound one. I really enjoyed this work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing and i am happy you enjoyed it and Happy New Year....
Hi Riddhi, I love the idea of this. Sometimes I think the world would be a better place without religion, or perhaps I mean religious intolerance and religious certainty. I like the one religion you write of.

One thing, the same principle as I think I commented previously on another of yours, is the call to action. If your previous verses have 'worked' then the call to action is unnecessary and a little patronising. I think they do work and personally I would remove the final verse.

Regards
Nigel

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing and i will definitely try to improve myself and Happy New Year....
I agree.
'Let us forget all our differences ,
based on religion , caste or nation.
Have just one religion in mind ,
and that is humanity ,
and say together ,
God is one.........."
One people and one earth. We must get a long for the sake of the children. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote


Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing and i am happy that you agree with me and Happy New Year...
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome and I hope you are having a safe and fun New Years.
Beautiful ideas. If only all who follow a certain religion accepted them.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing and Happy New Year....
I am atheist but yes humanity should be the only religion.. we are born as humans but the society labels us and divide us into different classes... loved the way you named Emily, Shazia and Vishaka in it intelligently... another good work....

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing and i am happy you enjoyed it and Happy New Year
CA Anurag Sharma

8 Years Ago

I always enjoy your writing... Happy New Year to you too.... :)
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Gee
Beautiful thoughts,sadly,ain't gonna happen.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing,,but why it will not happen it will if we will love our religion but not hate o.. read more
Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Absolutely right,
Really nice though your,
god is one but name many,
really nice poem your,
keep it up,
thanks for share,
happy new year,


Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing...and Happy new year in advance to you too.....
Mahi sain(Mahesh)

8 Years Ago

Your always welcome,
happy new year to u too again
good thoughts....just need many people like this who thnks in same manner...then our. country...our world will be such a beautiful place......

Posted 8 Years Ago


Riddhi

8 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing my poem

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