Who is human?????

This poem is all about what i think and believe in......

One day a little girl was asked,

What in future she wanted?

She gave a very sweet answer,

She wants to be humane not a human and nothing more.

                                    Pay to this a little more attention,

                                    Then definitely, sadness in your life will have no mention.

Tell me,

Who is a human?

The one who belongs to 

the species Homo sapiens.

Who is a human?

The one who becomes happy

by hurting others.

                                    Tell me,

                                    Who is a human?

                                     The one who runs  only behind money.

                                     forgetting all the ethics and morals.

                                     Who is a human?

                                      The one who lives and earns

                                      only for his family and not for his nation.

  

Please do tell me,

A human is the one who 

lives and let others live.

The one who thinks that his ability,

can be used for welfare of other organisms too.

The one who before thinking his benefit,

thinks about others.

                                      Yes, he is a human.

                                      The most beautiful creation of god,

                                       who can turn ugly anytime , anywhere..........................

Author's Note

I hope you like my poem and you also agree with me about this.....

Reviews

[Alias]

Really good subject, and a very good question. I like your experimental use of form as well keep at it x

[Riddhi]

Thank you reviewing my poem...

[samparks,sam]

sure I like poem and also agreed with you

[Riddhi]

Thank you for reviewing my poem.....

[Dayran]

It certainly refers to the most important thing a man can do. Find out who the human is.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing my poem...

[samparks,sam]

yes I am agreed, Every one is human

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing my poem..

[samparks,sam]

so nice go ahead with joy

[Jesse Gonzalez]

Yes, this is a good writing. I see where you're coming from. People are bad and they only think about themselves and please themselves and forget about everyone else who has life on this world also. They can be good when they want to be, but that is the sad part, they never want to be. Great poem though! Keep up the good work.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing my poem...

[Archos]

Great piece. I especially like the idea and the way you expressed it at the beginning. Good job!

[Riddhi]

Thanks for spending your precious time in reading my poem....

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Its really nice,
and i cant believe that a 15year old girl can do it.
Bt really nice and super....
Our true self Is being Who we are.
Nice work
thanks

[Riddhi]

Thank u for reviewing my poem....

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Your welcome

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Keep it up

[Gabriel]

It's a beautiful, beautiful poem which you have written.. really enjoyed reading this. It's nice to know that someone has their heart in the right place. Thanks for posting this.

[Gaurav]

It's a wonderful take on loss of humanity in the world of humans. Thanks for sharing.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reading my poem and writing review....

[Willard Wells]

Very nice work and I also question the human element of man regularly. Being human is more than your physical being. A true human has heart and soul and empathy for his fellow man.

[Riddhi]

Thank you sir for writing this review....i am really very grateful to you...