Who is human?????

This poem is all about what i think and believe in......

One day a little girl was asked,

What in future she wanted?

She gave a very sweet answer,

She wants to be humane not a human and nothing more.

                                    Pay to this a little more attention,

                                    Then definitely, sadness in your life will have no mention.

Tell me,

Who is a human?

The one who belongs to 

the species Homo sapiens.

Who is a human?

The one who becomes happy

by hurting others.

                                    Tell me,

                                    Who is a human?

                                     The one who runs  only behind money.

                                     forgetting all the ethics and morals.

                                     Who is a human?

                                      The one who lives and earns

                                      only for his family and not for his nation.

  

Please do tell me,

A human is the one who 

lives and let others live.

The one who thinks that his ability,

can be used for welfare of other organisms too.

The one who before thinking his benefit,

thinks about others.

                                      Yes, he is a human.

                                      The most beautiful creation of god,

                                       who can turn ugly anytime , anywhere..........................

Author's Note

I hope you like my poem and you also agree with me about this.....

Reviews

[mou]

The typical mind of human is grown by the influence of history itself..as in the theory of Darwin , a species have to struggle and run to save its sign on this competitive world...But now those pressure of saving its species is over but human forget it and get in the race more violently only to seek a power or position but forget to save its most essential quality ,called "Humanity"
A very nice message is blown over here..
I like it and thanks for sharing

[Riddhi]

Yes,actually humans have forgot humanity and i am glad that you liked this poem....

[Amelia Mae M.]

I understand that poem completely.

[Riddhi]

Thank you...

[glow]

very nice poem,but u can add some more good examples .but in all ur ppoem has gave a very good message

[Riddhi]

Thanks for viewing...

[Brad P]

Definitely can relate to this. Definitely makes you think. Thank you for sharing

[PenguinEmpiress]

wow.. this is very relate able, as this is something i think of very often. You've done a superb job of realism.

[Riddhi]

Thank you so much...

[Pushkar Prabhat]

great attempt.......
again, mature themes.......will great insights.......
i liked it!!!
:)
p.s. line 6 from the end
maybe "beings" sound better than organisms........just my opinion......

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Solar]

A poem that sees through human nature - the difference between being 'human' and 'humane' nicely versed.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Akki]

Oh, my god!
I think, you have a treasure of thoughts & you used it very well.
This poem is not just remarkable of yours but It's more than that.
you mention that in your poem about humanity is bitter, But It's a bitter truth of our humans.
Your poem makes a work to see a real face of us in a mirror of truth. This poem can create a big impact on the community. I liked & agree that your last lines in your poem.

Yes, he is a human.
the beautiful creation of god,
who can turn ugly anytime, anywhere?

It seems different. Hats off to you for this!

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing and i am happy you liked it....

[Akki]

You are most welcome!

[Prantik Ali]

A bitter truth and such a nice message!
Enjoyed it :)
Great work!

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Deanna M.]

This poem raises a lot of questions about who a human is. I really like your format, and the way you wrote this poem!! Keep up the good work and can't wait to read more of your work.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing and i am happy you liked it and Happy New Year....