Who is human?????

This poem is all about what i think and believe in......

One day a little girl was asked,

What in future she wanted?

She gave a very sweet answer,

She wants to be humane not a human and nothing more.

                                    Pay to this a little more attention,

                                    Then definitely, sadness in your life will have no mention.

Tell me,

Who is a human?

The one who belongs to 

the species Homo sapiens.

Who is a human?

The one who becomes happy

by hurting others.

                                    Tell me,

                                    Who is a human?

                                     The one who runs  only behind money.

                                     forgetting all the ethics and morals.

                                     Who is a human?

                                      The one who lives and earns

                                      only for his family and not for his nation.

  

Please do tell me,

A human is the one who 

lives and let others live.

The one who thinks that his ability,

can be used for welfare of other organisms too.

The one who before thinking his benefit,

thinks about others.

                                      Yes, he is a human.

                                      The most beautiful creation of god,

                                       who can turn ugly anytime , anywhere..........................

Author's Note

I hope you like my poem and you also agree with me about this.....

Reviews

[Muskan]

I love your way of using simpler words which are always capable of imprinting a deep impact on readers👍loved it

[Wesley Dingler]

I'm officially wowed, Riddhi. This most beautiful creation of God you speak of is a hedonist. And yes, i agree completely.


Keep up the great work.


-wes

[Riddhi]

Thank you Wesely..I am happy that you agree with me..

[Neville]

I do like these words and true.. lovely sentiments indeed.. who could argue with them or dare to disagree... N

[Riddhi]

Thank you so much for this lovely review...

[Neville]

an absolute pleasure..

[barleygirl]

I love that you imagine an original way to make this statement. It’s a statement about the people who are mostly in power/politics, or rich ones who do not care about the welfare of others, or worst of all in the USA -- people who hate immigration for only those who are not well-off & not white. I couldn’t agree with you more. I think you’ve presented much imagination as you define the details that make “human” an ugly concept . . . however, I would suggest coming back around to say what “humane” looks like, as a comparison. This poem is totally negative, only showing how bad “human” can be. But your message could be stronger if it ended on a positive, extending the comparison you begin with. Instead of “Please do not tell me . . .” (that humans are good -- in the next to last stanza) . . . I would like to see this stated in the opposite way, to emphasize what “humane” is all about (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Riddhi]

I will try to write another poem based on your suggestions soon..And thank you for your honest review..And actually what you said about USA , I was totally unaware about it..Thanks for your constructive review..

[splattercore]

What does make life... life? Is it the experiences we live? Is it the emotions we feel? Could we put everything into a computer and have it spit out a script? Or is it as organic as a flower in the garden? I'm sure your answer will differ greatly from mine and maybe the next person reading. But that's exactly the point.

Nice work! I'm loving it. Asking questions always makes for a great piece.

[Riddhi]

Actually , every person has his or her own perspective..I am happy that you liked it..

[Aaron]

wow, keep it up . very nicely expressed

[Whitelillies]

Good read..keep it up..!!

[Riddhi]

Thank you..

[PandaPeaceful]

God this poem is magnificent! Your questions linger in the air like mist, slowly revealing the honest truth about the world, and its inhabitants. Your words interact in such a beautiful way, and I admire the unique structure you have incorporated in this piece. Gorgeous work!

[Riddhi]

Thank you so much...I am really happy that you liked my poem...

[PandaPeaceful]

No problem!

[Surya]

Hahaha, yeah I agree with your poem, i guess not every human is the same but almost everyone are....
Thank you again for sharing..:)

[Riddhi]

Thank you...

[zunie frost]

I love it . it's a very different poem I must say !!!
Your creativety is very excellent !!!
Superb work

[Riddhi]

Thanks for spending your precious time in reading my poem

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!