Dream India

This poem i wrote for my dearest motherland. This is my dream about how my nation should be.......

What dreams  were seen

By freedom fighters for our nation?

All of us know although

They are nowhere mentioned.

Some of them were of a corruption-free

And an Independent nation,

But do you think with present India

They have any relation?

Britishers have definitely gone,

But because of corrupt politicians

We are still to mourn.

Why only the government is put to blame?

We are also having our share in it the same.

Have not we somewhere

 Forgotten our duty as citizens?

To be loyal and never give any bribe

Or take any bribe.

Come on, let us take an oath

To follow our duty as a citizen,

Then only we can make

Dream India as our nation.................

Author's Note

This is my dream , a 15-yr-old girl's dream , about how my country should be. I am sure that if we all follow our every duty as citizen as described in the poem above the definitely dream India can become each one's nation.

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Great insight into a place of wonder for me, still learning the culture.
I love this dream, and wish it was a virus to be caught by other countries.

Thanks for the share.

[Happy hours]

You are absolutely right..we the citizen of country are equally responsible for wrong deeds ruining the roots. Nice piece. Thanks for sharing

[Pushkar Prabhat]

great start Riddhi.........
i really appreciate your mature thoughts............we must stop the blame game......and as an individual, each, take collective action.........
very well done.......
i liked it!!!
:)

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...i am really happy that you liked it....

[richieb]

Riddhi, your poem echo's the plea's of many nations. The poor and working class usually set the bar for the moral structure of a nation. Poets as yourself can bring a fresh pure innocence through your dreams and words. You are a blessing to India and its beautiful people. Many Blessings, Richie B.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...I really appreciate it....

[Kunal Upreja]

Motivating poem.. Keep on writing.. :D

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Akki]

This poem of yours is a master stroke. Nice writing about Dream India. You poke everything that are sensitive issues of India & you dare to poke through your this poem.
Nice thoughts & well arrangement.
Keep it up!
Your future is bright no doubt.
All the best for your journey.
Write poems and poets like this for us.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for your Kind words..I really appreciate it...

[Akki]

Now I am tired to say welcome to you... lol zzz
But, you really good in poem so pleasure is always mine!

[samparks,sam]

yes definitely we will do best for our nation. do not worry

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Solar]

Beautiful - well-said.

>What dreams were seen
By freedom fighters for our nation?<

They shed blood gave their lives - but colonised mind-set remains and forgets.

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...I really appreciate it...

[Solar]

Welcome and look forward to your reviews of my writing.

[Vishal Suthar]

Well , I am not disheartening you but the same passion and fidelity towards India must be remained within you when you grow up...I liked the way you believe in making society more beautiful infusing your good thoughts.....Go Ahead....Best wishes....

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing...

[Deepak Belbase]

when i was of your age i never thought about this... you're really an extraordinary girl! thanks to remind me of my part. i hope you'll going on the same way!

[Riddhi]

Thanks for reviewing and i am going on this way...Really thank you......