Her Fire

Her smile is seared into my memory, as if her mouth were a branding iron...

Flames ignite her eyes.

     She dances, shrouded in ash,

          Bashfully, coyly.

Author's Note

5-7-5... Attempting haiku.

Reviews

[Ed Fagan]

This was done nicely, I would think this would be more Senryu than Haiku though.

[Kringefest]

Oh okay :P Thank you!

[Lily Mae]

And so they burn.. :) beautifully done..xo

[Kringefest]

Thank you very much (:

[Lily Mae]

Your welcome.. :) x