Enough is enough

Enough is enough

A Poem by John A Common
"

Standing up again.

"

I blew my rent money on booze.

Had a book reading yesterday,

I'm so screwed up I dont even care about the book.

Today I cannot stop puking and shiting.

I am done with this s**t.

I have to quit drinking,

or I die.

It's time to get back up.

Enough is enough.

God please help me.

This is no way to pass.

Enough is enough. 

© 2009 John A Common


Author's Note

John A Common
Get up or die,that's where I'm at.

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Oh yea! Crack in the bottle....lol Hello, at least there is the admission of a problem, that is the first step. Second, realizing it is a sickness. Sometimes you just need the help. But then you fall into the what is "your drug of choice." Never ask me that...lol "Got Addiction" I know I do and I have to monitor my fun, or I will fun out....if you get my drift. And to hell with a bunch of 12 steps programs. Funny don't remember how I stopped, but I did.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Addiction is fun, until it gets out of hand. I've gotten help for my most serious addictions, but I'm still dealing with some others. Kick your addiction!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Straightforward and to the point. Really gets the strong message across.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a powerful piece. It is conclusive right from the beginning, but emotional nonetheless.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Then get up, or die, your poem is a full toilet bowl, no piety from me my friend, I know better.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh yea! Crack in the bottle....lol Hello, at least there is the admission of a problem, that is the first step. Second, realizing it is a sickness. Sometimes you just need the help. But then you fall into the what is "your drug of choice." Never ask me that...lol "Got Addiction" I know I do and I have to monitor my fun, or I will fun out....if you get my drift. And to hell with a bunch of 12 steps programs. Funny don't remember how I stopped, but I did.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is so emotive and raw... a great write

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This poem is great. It shows the reality so many people wish to avoid and deny. Good job putting it out there for the world to see.


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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John A Common
John A Common

taylor, MI



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I am a poet and song writer. I have just been published and it's awesome. My book is called self-pity interupted by tragedy and it should be out by Feb 1. The code is ISBN#1-60813-034-7 and you can or.. more..

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