I'm Blank

I just can't describe this feeling of not being able to describe anything =(

I’m typing this piece but don’t k__w what __ say

I know t__t it’s there b_t it’s slipping away

I’m fighting a_d pushing to k__p this on track

As w__ds and ideas fall right d__n my back

 

Whatever! No matter! There’s plenty come!

1 h__r, still nothing, I’m si__ing here dumb

I wiggle __d wonder a_d seethe in disgust

And scream in defeat “Enough is enough!”

 

I open Mozilla and chime into Google

And type in the search ‘Stuff rhyming with Poodle’

Noodle, Boodle, Feudal, Strudel?

“Sorry, I’m blank” so I’ll sit here and doodle...........

 

(I hope you accept my apology)

Author's Note

Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Tenebrousoul]

Mwahaha! i LOVED THIS! Can you send me a copy of the doodle?? 0_0

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The structure of this poem is quite interesting, the title relating to the content of the poem, 'blank' spaces, was a clever technique. The use of a rhyming scheme in combination with slant rhyme was very effective. The poem as well as the picture is very cute, very well used. An enjoyable read.

[d]

hmm, i like it but don't know what to say. maybe this is just a "like-it" poem

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. well, that's the most endearing apology ever ... you leave the reader quite speechless ... and boy can you draw ! ... :) ...

[Megan]

Haha you make me laugh!!
Very good, I use google sometimes too ;)
Goofy stuff like this is so awesome and I love that you wrote this, it completely made my day!