i can't say anything right now. i'll have to read it several more times. then please give me about a month to give it some thought. if at that time i've reached any sort of conclusion, i'll let you know. but be warned. i don't think it'll do much good.
but what do i mean by that you might wonder? well, let me tell you. firstly, (please be patient with me. there are many parts to my explanation and most i have not yet fully established but given the right amount of thought, i'm sure i can explain to you the thought i've given to it. you see, there are so many aspects to be considered. now, where was i, oh yes...)
i can't say anything right now. i'll have to read it several more times. then please give me about a month to give it some thought. if at that time i've reached any sort of conclusion, i'll let you know. but be warned. i don't think it'll do much good.
but what do i mean by that you might wonder? well, let me tell you. firstly, (please be patient with me. there are many parts to my explanation and most i have not yet fully established but given the right amount of thought, i'm sure i can explain to you the thought i've given to it. you see, there are so many aspects to be considered. now, where was i, oh yes...)
I am an upstart writer who has just accepted and is embracing the fact that writing may be my calling. I was always able to write really well but never really bothered to cultivate my skills until now.. more..