Whirlpools

I miss my husband. He had to go on a business trip and though it has only been a short time, I am anxious for his return. In the meantime, I picture his eyes so blue....

All I can hear is a rumbling storm

Thunderclaps ringing in my ears

Then blue whirlpools swirled with fire

And my eyes fill with tears

 

So beautiful the love he bares

And I know not who this is

I only know that I love him

Truly, this is love, love lives

 

So many colors in and out of my life

Red's hate consumes my heart

Black hides me from the pain

And kills Pink before she starts

 

I shouldn't know love anymore

It's too hard to recognize it

I think it's time for the end

There is no love, it doesn't fit

 

Then blue whirlpools swirled with fire

And my eyes fill with tears

There is someone out there for me

Someone to erase all colors fears

 

Nobody wants to go at life alone

So, I say why bother trying so hard?

Why not accept your colors given?

Why let your heart get marred!?

 

Then blue whirlpools swirled with fire.....

Reviews

[Erotic Goddess]

I shouldn't know love anymore
It's too hard to recognize it
I think it's time for the end
There is no love, it doesn't fit

This poem is a study of contrasts, so many conflicting emotions, a give and take of the mind, trying to decipher the true feelings that you have, that you understand, that you need to know. I really love the conflict in this, more than I can say, it's just so honest. Great write my friend.

xxoxx
Stephanie

[Poeticme]

Very well penned my lady, loved every line.
Love comes when you least expect​ it, thank you for sharing this deep write

Poeticme

[Clarisse Nanoit]

love lives... what a statement. Very nice poem! I love it. It sends a message--just because you don't have love right now doesn't mean it doesn't exist for you. WAIT! lol. Lovely imagery. Written nicely. It compliments the message in an unmatchable way. Glad I read it. =)
KH

[Clarisse Nanoit]

love lives... what a statement. Very nice poem! I love it. It sends a message--just because you don't have love right now doesn't mean it doesn't exist for you. WAIT! lol. Lovely imagery. Written nicely. It compliments the message in an unmatchable way. Glad I read it. =)
KH

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So many colors in and out of my life
Red's hate consumes my heart
Black hides me from the pain
And kills Pink before she starts

this is amazing work and that stanza bout the colors is brilliant... For reasons unknown we tend to feel not worthy of love especially when we love the person back wondering if we are good enough... I agree with Steph the use of conflicting emotions in this piece is wonderful.

[Katie .G.]

I liked it. I felt a lot of feelings going on. Keep it up. :)

[Alan - aka - Snoopy]

A heartfelt write that pulls at ones heart strings a bit, as you really let true feelings show. Beautifully done. Snoopy

[Frank Terino]

This is soft, beautifully written end expressed with sincerity and detail, quite capturing and lovely.
Keep up the great work.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this poem is amazing. Very beautifully written and you did a great job. Nice work!!!

Heather

[JRB]

hard write feelings flowing,
Jan/uisiom

[Anata]

Touching ...
Very touching ....

And so much truth ... noone is made to go through life alone ... yet some do, if they'e happy only they can tell.

But mankind has this thing, you can't describe, something that makes it quite impossible to stop looking for that other person, the person you might just share your whole life with ...

You stated that conflict so beautifully here ...

Really nicely done!