my escape

my escape,

my only way out.

forgot my way in.

where do i begin.

world full of sin.

does anyone win.

or does everyone just give up.

which one are you.

is your glass half empty?

or half full?

my only escape!!!

is to persevere.

prove everyone wrong.

undeniably strong.

my only escape,

is to suceed.

Reviews

[David Burke]

this is awesome man I love the positive message and feelings behind it great job bro

[koty bell]

thx alot man this one i wrote yrs ago lol like this one to thx for the review feel free to check out the others :-)

[David Burke]

I definitely will lol you've got talent bro you really do

[Sami Khalil]

Good thoughts . Great ending . Escape into the arms of love .

[Coyote Poetry]

"my only escape,
is to succeed."
The poem was strong and the ending was true. Success destroyed the doubters. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[StarDreamer2010]

I like this poem. It reminds of the struggles of life and how I need to work out my problems with my friends and family.

[Joseph Serrano]

i feel like this all the time, great expression.

[Arthur Stewart]

really good mate, the speed that you built with your language gave the poem the impact it deserved.

[paul]

hey, great powm

[PaperHearts]

A very interesting concept! I thought that this had a really brilliant flow to it, and that the short and sharp lines made for a really direct and effective poem. I loved the lines "prove everyone wrong./undeniably strong.". I did think that there was a slightly excessive use of punctuation, but other than that, this was a really strong write. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

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indeed..the only way is to succeed..

[Rick]

Nice job. Keep that up and you will continue to succeed.