beautiful skies

beautiful skies,

surprise my eyes.

the colors.

catch my attention.

blue,orange,pink,yellow,red.

beyond the sky.

upon the clouds.

the heavens speak.

clear and loud.

time is short.

live for now.

beautiful skies.

Reviews

[Roe]

amazing!!

[dillonjensen]

So much meaning put into so few words, really great poem you have here. The imagery you get from reading this is fascinating, and also I feel that it makes you really put into question your viewing of life. Are you living in the past, present, or fixated on the future? Makes you think critically about different aspects of your life.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

short and well written, bravo !!
Loved it, good theme and you mastered it superbly ! I really enjoyed the use of the same verse at the beggining and at the end of the poem, it gives the idea of a cycle, something that never ends (just like the skies). I loved the rhyme between the first two verses !
Great work, great job =D

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem. I like the description and very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

so true and nicely put.....keep it up,i really liked this ,a nice message.

[My Fair Lady]

Taking notice of the beauty of the sky, fills the heart. Much Enjoyed this.

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. beautiful thoughts ... beautifully expressed ... it's important to live ...

[Zack Burton]

That's pretty kewl. I like the rhyming most of all, but I'm a bit of a sucker for that. I wish you could be more detailed... but that's just me thinking randomly.

[Jon]

Nice write:D I really liked the....
Beyong the sky, upon the clouds, the heavens speak, clear and loud. Good job nice ryming:D

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

thoughtful~lovely and reenergizing~