the greatest feeling

the greatest feeling.

you by my side.

together we go.

along for the ride.

no better feeling,

then when i'm with you.

may be cheesy,

but it's true.

how i feel about you,

undescribable.

the feelings when i'm with you,

there undeniable.

the greatest feeling i have felt.

girl you make my heart melt.

 

Reviews

[Roe]

you pour your feelings into your writes. i really love them

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice feel in this poem. I like the desire of happiness to share time and life with another. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[youngwriter222]

I really enjoyed reading this. It has a good rhyme scheme and I can feel the deep emotion in it. for sure not "cheesy" :)

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. ohhhh ... amazingly lovingly written ... very mesmerizing ...

[Jon]

I really like this write one, great job good ryming work brotha.

[koty bell]

yup

[Katie Hardin]

is this one of the ones you wrote for me dear? i like it(:

[tizzy k]

awwwww if you would read this to a girl telling her how you feel her heart would melt too

[justice]

:) this is a very nice piece. Full of emotion and wonderful flow. I do find the punctuation at the end of EVERY line distracting. Let the poem breath. There does not need to be that mark at the end of every line. It will help the flow. Thank you for sharing!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

simple and true~ with emotional richness in each line of expression~