disguised love

is this love way deep in my soul?

 

taking me over consuming me whole.

 

palms are sweaty, i'm under your spell.

 

only for you my heart is for sell.

 

taking it slow, you understand.

 

but how i long to be your man.

 

my mind takes over to a better place.

 

where all i see is your pretty face.

 

when your near, my heart skips beats like scratches on a cd.

 

pit of my stomach butterflies, no surprise.

 

so is this love thats taking me over?

 

here you are, my four leaf clover.

 

always reliable.

 

the way you make me feel, undescribable.

 

i can't lie.

 

your eyes twinkle like stars in the sky.

 

priceless, your personality, your style.

 

i'd do anything, just to see you smile.

Author's Note

i think this is my best one

Reviews

[guitarman]

Great poem. I love the scratches on a cd analogy :) such a great idea !

[Geraldine]

Awww, so sweet. ^^ Good write. :D

[Coyote Poetry]

A true love is when our only dream is to see our love content and happy. I like this poem.
"your eyes twinkle like stars in the sky.
priceless, your personality, your style.
i'd do anything, just to see you smile."
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Cassie Fraga]

aaaaawwww.... sooooo sweeeeeet!!! yes this is a great write!! lucky is the one you pen this for!!!

[dillonjensen]

This is really good and the rhyme scheme helps it flow throughout the poem. Well written I might also add. I did see a typo though, one line you said "your" instead of "you're," but other than that it looked fine man. Keep on writing, good stuff.

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

lovely.....great write,,keep it up.

[SuicidePact.]

I think this is amazing! well done

[外人 (Gaiji..]

amazing poem, deep and very well written =D

[The White Wolf]

Awwww....this was so sweet! What we wouldn't do, wouldn't be, for the one we love.

[SapphirianVampiress]

Okay so this is so far my favorite poem. I love this one :) It is true and very realistic :)