Every time

this is a poem i wrote for my boyfriend i was wondering if i should give it to him

Every time im around you,
I get a tingling sensation in my stomach
it must be butterflies
Every time you kiss me,
It only makes me love you even more
Every time you say the words,
I Love You
it makes me forget
Every time you hold my hand,
I get butterflies x10
Every time im around you,
I can think straight because,
Of the way you make me feel.

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

I can think straight because,
Of the way you make me feel.

~ Question how do you think straight when your in love?..because for me, I can't focus on anything but that person.

aside from that the poem flows with a lot of emotion and love and I think you did a splendid job--
-maria

[kota_ann]

it's the way he makes me feel when I'm around him but yet he is still the only thing i think about and thank you for your help

[Tinkerbellje]

A lovely poem. I think your boyfriend will love it :-)