clogged thinking

words wander in the brain

yet the ink won't run

the words won't write

and I feel speechless

but I know what should be said

and nothing means anything

because the more I bable

the more I love you.

Reviews

[The Spaniard]

And this I find amazingly relevent. So much captured in such a short burst of words. I feel this piece in my own life. well done

[FIERCE-no matter who yo..]

Stunning poem even though some said that you tripped up on line 6 I think it was and excellent poem. Thank you for submitting to our contest and good luck.

[crap]

the first line is your strongest, I was tripped up on line 6 though, wasn't exactly sure what it was addressing, its a really vague line. overall very nice poem though.

[Philosophile. (Maddy)]

I enjoyed this. I've experienced this same feeling before. I loved the line "words wander in the brain."
Good job!