Two Black Cats

Two Black Cats

A Poem by Maxine

Two black cats
Went out to play.
They didn't come back.
Same story, different days.
Both had white patches,
Small paws, big ears,
long whiskers,
not enough fears.
They never came back
From hunting that day,
How they were killed,
I cannot say.
I only know 
I loved them both.
I miss them both
I needed them both.
Two black cats 
went out to see
The world and life.
Now they're both free.

© 2011 Maxine


Author's Note

Maxine
...I.E., Snickers and Oreo. Two old cats of mine.

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I really think that the repetition towards the end convey's the sadness of the situation. I would also like to say sorry for your loss. As a double cat owner, I know how close the connection with a pet can be.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Justa coupla days. And you were informed...just now. by the poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Okay WTF?!?! Since when has Snickers been gone and why the *excessive ultimate Wizard Swears* was I not informed?!?!?!?!?!? *growl*

Posted 13 Years Ago



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