Lost

I don't know where I stand,

I don't know where I am,

I can not be found by man,

Do not grab me,

Don't take hand,

Bring a flashlight,

 Make it bright,

So it may guide me through the night,

Get it to me, at all costs,

For, dear friend, I am Lost

Author's Note

Comments please?

Reviews

[C.C. Marx]

Well I could bring you a map but I don't think they have any called "the map of life" and mind you it would be hard to see if it was dark.......short and too the point, lacking a little detail but still nicely done

[koolkat]

Thank you for telling what is on your mind.

[C.C. Marx]

My pleasure!! Just a little humor

[The Nameless]

It's short and sweet =D
I like the rhyme and the "do not grab me" part.

You could perhaps have described the emotions of the person a bit more, though I still think you should keep it short.
Choose your words carefully.

Good luck, keep writing ;P

[koolkat]

Thank you for giving your honest oppinion, I appriciate it!