The Deadly Freeze #2

Joey and I searched the whole town to see if anyone else was unfrozen. But unfortunately nobody was. We went to my house to think of what could be going on, but  nothing came to mind when we were at my house. Suddenly, Joey heard a loud rumble. Then, a white, bright flash occurred and an oddly dressed man entered the room and said "Are you Abbie Clare"! "Yes, I am", I said. " I am Zeus from Mt. Olympus, I must take you to Mt. Olympus for your own safety." Then Zeus grabbed me by the arm and almost left but when his head got out the window Joey grabbed Zeus and punched him in the face and then Zeus shot Joey with a lightning bolt and left with me in his grasp......................................................................TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviews

[Phillitup]

Interesting! I like the twists!

[koolkat]

Dell is that your real photo or is that Ross Lynch

[Harley Rose]

well... that was unexpected... you know you dont have to keep saying "TO BE CONTINUED" you can just create a book and make these chapters...

[Dreamz Are Power]

Awesome Keep continueing I love the suspense keep publishing too it is awesome!