The Deadly Freeze

The heavy winds rested for a split second. Everything and everyone had been frozen. I felt like I could hardly breathe. I walk the streets of my home town. I knew something was terribly wrong. Then something or somebody strongly grabbed me by the arm and pulled me into the thick, gray fog......


When I gained sight of the object I realized it was my guy-friend Joey, who is always there for me. He wasn't frozen either. What was going on!?!?!?...................................TO BE CONTINUED  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Phillitup]

The beginning pulls the reader in, creating some sort of trance. I love how you describe everything. Nicely penned!
Best regards,
Dell

[koolkat]

Thanks by the way are you friends with dreamz are power

[koolkat]

and paige mckenzie

[koolkat]

Im coming up with a new deadly freeze

[koolkat]

Anyone?
please