Empty Pockets

Reviews

[SMcIlhon]

This flows very well. I like it. I'm trying to find something I don't like but I can't. I would put "it must just" on one line and "be you" on the one beneath it. Other than that, it's solid. Nice work.

[Courtney]

I'm missing something
I feel
I pause
pat down my pockets
look around
searching

In bed
I lie awake
thinking
what did I forget
but every time
I realize
it must
just be you

Then you come
Then you go
and the next thing
I know
I pause
pat down my pockets
searching

But it's just you
It's always you