Living among dumbest people

If you live among lowest people of the society, you eventually go crazy, even when you try to manifest it, that state may be of craze...

A few more steps to the state of craze,
nervous and endocrine systems are drastically tired:
The brain refuses to appraise.

I pulled down all the sound proof shades,
so I hear no more abusive bombs continuously fired-
a few more steps to the state of craze.

The world has become an unpleasant maze,
every exit is thoroughly wired.
The brain refuses to appraise…

Evil mouths never intend to praise,
their aggravating purpose is only to be admired-
a few more steps to the state of craze.

Arrogance and ignorance rise to blaze,
in their egos, humbleness and kindness have already quired.
The brain refuses to appraise…

Let me find a light in this haze,
because I am able to manifest anything as acquired.
A few more steps to the state of craze,
the brain refuses to appraise…

 

July 25, 2008

Reviews

[vindictivesunshine]

The repetition gave it the reinforcement that helps to sow the fabric of the poem together. Makes for an interesting read.

[Dalaina Renee]

I think there are always those days when you feel the world took a stupid pill that day. Well written!

[Jason Henry]

quite the unique poem...the repetition and rhyme are unfamiliar, but in a good way. there was no way i was going to ignore a poem with such a title though lol! everything you said was true